My Love for You

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    My Love for You

    I see in your eyes the feelings you feel,
    And how sometimes you can't believe I'm real.
    I may act cold it's like I don't care,
    But I want you to know I'll always be there.

    I tell you with words, my love grows and grows,
    If I could love you more I'll never know.
    My soul is bared, my heart is yours,
    These feelings are pure, so my heart just soars.

    Now it is over, my life is complete,
    With you by my side even death we can cheat.
    So I've proven my love, our hearts are now whole,
    I would give you anything, even my soul.

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    Jericho1621 commented on My Love for You

    04-15-2010

    wow this is very deep I envy the love that you speak about.. It's as if you've surrendered yourself to one and one alone.. How I wonder what it is you talk about, I hope someday for myself, I will find out.
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    Beautylover commented on My Love for You

    10-20-2009

    There are a lot of feelings .I can tell you have a very sensitiv nature and your heart is created to be filled of Love. Well done Beautylover
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    lenitabonita commented on My Love for You

    04-29-2009

    oh wow I luv this and the last part is the best!
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    painz commented on My Love for You

    02-23-2009

    yes very great poem
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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