A Leap for Life

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    A Leap for Life

    Feeling cold and all alone,
    is nothing like I would have known.
    Safely trapped inside my cave,
    always afraid to misbehave.
    I hear my cry and see my tear,
    because I know that life's so near.
    I laugh at the insanity of it all,
    cause I know I'm beginning to fall.
    Out life's window which seems so grand,
    and now I know my soul is damned.
    So watch me now as I take this leap,
    and over my fate you must not weep.

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    VanGogh commented on A Leap for Life

    03-28-2009

    Emotional tide of dispare, will hopefully give someone who really cares. Breath of fresh air, leaves one to ponder and stare.
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    lovebastard commented on A Leap for Life

    02-25-2009

    I like your poem is very straight forward. It's so easy to feel it.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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