Object of Lust

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    Object of Lust

    His eyes are like liquid gold,
    seeing right into your soul.
    Though he always seems so cold,
    without him you don't feel whole.

    He haunts your dreams at night,
    then you wake and think he's there.
    Something about him just isn't right,
    you think you're crazy but you don't care.

    His skin is as cold as ice,
    but his scent is intoxicating to you.
    He has saved you more than twice,
    you know in your heart what you must do.

    For others these feelings you have are wrong,
    in your heart is the feeling you trust.
    It's something you've known all along,
    he is not just an object of lust.

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    AmandaT commented on Object of Lust

    11-19-2009

    I agree with Fenixmind and Kah....it's like a scene of a vampire movie...made me think about Twilight. Great job! I love your emotion throughout your poetry.

    Richisfun commented on Object of Lust

    06-06-2009

    Very nice ! You have a good style or writing, keep it up, and dont let his coldness bother you ! hehe

    fenixmind commented on Object of Lust

    02-24-2009

    Great approach, almost an screenplay for a vampire movie... Fenix

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    MiserysMistress’s Poems (17)

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    Emptiness 14
    My Love for You 5
    Object of Lust 4
    Loving You 2
    What you do 3
    My Perfect Love 2
    Passion and Love 2
    The Token 0
    A Test Of Friendship 0
    My Fantasy 2
    A Leap for Life 2
    Lifeless Eyes 1
    Forbidden 1
    Timeless 4
    Your Eyes 3
    Looking into his eyes 3
    My Heart Aches 3