My Life

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My Life

I collected what's left, never to be whole again.
We began something before it should have been.
A lost soul, a broken heart, how did we grow apart?
It's my fault I should have known it from the start.  No matter how bad you want it to be, you can't force it, you will see. The only real question is do you want me? I've cried until the tears are no more.  My question was answered when you walked out that door. I don't want what's best for me I want what's best for us.  Because I'm not a man of fake and false feelings I'm a man you can trust. Confide in me and I will not let you down. If you dig deep enough, true love can be found. With a love as pure as ours how it could it be wrong? One day we will reunite I hope its not too long. Mistakes I have made, your trust has been broken. No matter the pain its my heart you have stolen. So please return to me before it's to late. It's your life I understand I can't dictate. The decision that you make is solely on your own, but I can't continue to live this life alone. So if you can find it in heart to give me one more chance I can prove to you this is not a dead romance.  Sometimes you just know two people are made for each other. I knew from day one that you would be my lover.  The time that I wait makes me less of a man, so to reunite us, I will do whatever I can. I hold my hand out hoping yours to fit in mine.  I'm desperately looking for any kind of sign.  Without you it takes my will to want to live. Because it's to you that my life I want to give!

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stever commented on My Life

12-01-2009

i did get another chance with..my mary..you should read..[marys song] by me..stever

lois2lane245 commented on My Life

12-01-2009

this is very good and out standing it is something we can all relate to. becouse we have all been there. you do have a way of letting your emotions fill the paper . outstanding

Jayandben commented on My Life

12-01-2009

I loved the way you described your pain. My favorite line was "I hold my hand out hoping yours to fit in mine"

mistynites26 commented on My Life

12-01-2009

AWWWWWWWW!!! Wonderful write!!! You made my heart melt just from reading it. You are pouring your heart out to the one you loved and lost oh how many times have I too done that. I love the poem skitzo. Very nice and very touching.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

SkitZo’s Poems (26)

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Contempt 0
Superior 1
Together Forever 0
Surprise 0
Okay 0
Saddest Day 1
Real Love 1
Happiness is Free 1
Make no mistake 1
Second Chance 1
Beside You 0
Better Side 0
My Life 4
Better Life 1
Fight 1
Alone I Stand 3
Peace 2
Your Place 1
How I Feel 4
Without You 1
Real Friend 2
Your Alone 2
Friends Forever 2
Who's to blame 3
Guilty Conscience 2
The Lonely Part of Sin 3