DREAM

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DREAM

This ink sinks much deeper than the paper pierced by the rings of this trapper keeper, it seems to me, this seems to be the only thing keeping me sane, the paper that this pen stains offers a view into my soul clearer than freshly Windexed window panes, indexed in a mix of proper terms and slang, this is the birth of my creation, my imaginations big bang,  It's far more than theory, It's irrefutable proof that  I have nothing to prove, My mind blossoms the impossible, my dreams are within reach, my mind's the only obstacle, My achievements will only be as big as I dare to dream, so I'm pushing the boundaries of my mind, ignoring the limits placed upon this place by the doubters and the cynics,  the key to achieving a dream is believing it exists, The key to believing is this...DREAM

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cherrymuse commented on DREAM

06-26-2011

No paragraphs, no dots, no line breaks... these words are as limitless and with no boundaries as the thoughts they express. Quite nice. :)

rootsandwings

06/30/2011

Thanks, I really appreciate the comment. I wanted the structure to represent the content and I'm glad that was conveyed to you. Thanks again for the kind words.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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