I'm Gone

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  • Lost Love
    • spazrocks420
    • needs to write a paper for class and has no idea where to start

    I'm Gone

    As I stare at the brick wall,

    I wonder how life could just fall.

     

    Forever in misery and stuck in pain,

    Blinded by lighting and droning in rain.

     

    No one feels this pain I feel.

    That’s how I know it’s real.

    My dreams of you are haunting,

    And thoughts are often taunting.

     

    Sneaking upon any hour, of the day,

    Like a predator approaching its prey


     Your face and voice will haunt my mind,

    Until I’m lost and left behind.

     

    Apparently you don’t care,

    About what we could share.

     

    Just forget me until I’m gone,

    Or until you realize you were wrong.

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    dumplin commented on I'm Gone

    10-15-2009

    I think you meant to say 'drowning in rain'. Nicely written and expressed, though. I feel the pain in it. I'd be honored if you'd read one of mine called "It's Enough". I think you'll identify.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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