A Gun in the Hand

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  • Dark Poetry
    • spazrocks420
    • needs to write a paper for class and has no idea where to start

    A Gun in the Hand
    The gun's to your worthless head,
    as you relize your not yet dead.

    Thoughts run through your empty mind.
    Your'e life was not a normal kind.

    As you hold that gun,
    your thoughts still run.

    What are you going to do?
    Will the bullet go through?

    Will anyone even cry?
    Will you even die?

    Is there life after death?
    Will you take your last breath?

    Has anyone even cared?
    SHOOT THE GUN unless your scared.

    Hurry hurry or I'll do it for you!
    One, two, the bullet went through.

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    CaptKierkegaard commented on A Gun in the Hand

    05-17-2009

    You're not bad- watch that your/ you're thing though, it's really annoying. And check your spelling. You've definitely got some raw talent, keep at it!
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    aatheart commented on A Gun in the Hand

    03-04-2009

    The cry is real, so is the fears, however never let death steal life- that only God can reveal. Much love to you!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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