dead or alive

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    dead or alive

    I thought you would always be there;
    and that you some what cared.

    I called you in a time of need;
    I felt sucidal and wanted to bleed.

    You were someone I thought I could call;
    but you wouldn't help me at all.

    I told you I wanted to die;
    you didn't care if I was dead or alive.

    So I sat there all alone;
    sitting there holding that phone.

    You never really cared,
    about anything we shared.

    I'm glad we stopped talking.
    when i see you, I just keep walking.

    I'm finally over you,
    and everything you do.

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    markrohaley commented on dead or alive

    01-21-2009

    yes ! :) I wonder if those two poems are about the same person? very good!

    allenjermy commented on dead or alive

    12-24-2008

    i lie this one, its kinda like what i am going thru with my Angel. I am so broken down now. Keep up the work...Don Folks

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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