dead or alive

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    dead or alive

    I thought you would always be there;
    and that you some what cared.

    I called you in a time of need;
    I felt sucidal and wanted to bleed.

    You were someone I thought I could call;
    but you wouldn't help me at all.

    I told you I wanted to die;
    you didn't care if I was dead or alive.

    So I sat there all alone;
    sitting there holding that phone.

    You never really cared,
    about anything we shared.

    I'm glad we stopped talking.
    when i see you, I just keep walking.

    I'm finally over you,
    and everything you do.

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    markrohaley commented on dead or alive

    01-21-2009

    yes ! :) I wonder if those two poems are about the same person? very good!

    allenjermy commented on dead or alive

    12-24-2008

    i lie this one, its kinda like what i am going thru with my Angel. I am so broken down now. Keep up the work...Don Folks

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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