All You Had

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  • Lost Love
    • spazrocks420
    • needs to write a paper for class and has no idea where to start

    All You Had

    To think that your finally gone,
    makes me want to die.
    I listen to your favorite song,
    and slowly begin to cry.

    You killed me with all you had,
    compleatly broke me down.
    To think about you makes me sad,
    and my smile turns into a froun.

    I loved you with my whole heart,
    I wish you would of loved me back.
    Somethings must be apart,
    some love I'll just have to lack.

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    PRober commented on All You Had

    06-26-2009

    very nice... sweet! That must've been inspired by someone in your past babe.

    markrohaley commented on All You Had

    01-21-2009

    very nice young lady

    allenjermy commented on All You Had

    12-24-2008

    I like this one better, keep it up. And you go far in your writting...Don Folks

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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