HATRED...

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  • WrittenJustice
  • just need to know if any of this is worth a damn...thanks!

HATRED...

Rage burning, the fire within
hatred of you forever the sin
 From your mouth deceitfull lies
my fondest wish to hear your cries
 Tears unending you should run
when I catch you, it's over-done
 You will lie there, eyes all a glaze
my hands held squeezing just below your face
 Throat is crushed, eyes are swollen
legs lie bent, shattered broken
 Bubbles and foam, not quite screaming
from your throat blood is streaming
 Hands unclenched, a chesire grin I wear
with a fist full of hair
 Being quite still, for you'll move no more
final understanding as you lay on the floor
 The final breath, deaths silent bell
don't think it's over, I'll meet you in hell

SPC Knight Gregory M.
Kuwait-After the war

 

 

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redbloodink commented on HATRED...

03-20-2010

hatred can bring any one here... but resisting these thoughts I do... cause I know love beats all...... red

Sydney commented on HATRED...

02-22-2010

this is really intense. its really deep too. gave me pictures in mind that looked really clear.

Shajami commented on HATRED...

07-06-2009

Wow! I feel the intensity. I also have a poem like this but I haven't posted it. I might post it tomorrow...But I like the way you write, its inspiring and I feel like I can relate in ways. again good job hun~

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

WrittenJustice’s Poems (23)

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" Camaro" 4
" TRANS AM" 1
" Rachell" 3
My old Friend 4
Collector of Souls 8
ANGEL FACE... 10
GUILTY... 6
SUFFER THE CHILDREN... 9
TRUTH TOLD... 5
PUSHED ASIDE... 2
LAYIN IT DOWN... 1
HATRED... 3
DAMNATION... 1
BLIND... 1
WINTER... 1
Betrayal 3
Manevolence 0
WAR.... 1
ALONE... 0
Love... 0
Love of Misfortune...
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0
SALVATION... 1
LIFE..... 0