GUILTY...

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    • WrittenJustice
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    GUILTY...

     Words I have spoken, deeds have I done
    these sins, mine alone unknown to my son
     Crimes I've committed, cherished ones lost
    envious of the union forever the cost
     Thoughts formed to words better left unspoken
    what once was so prescious, lies battered and broken
     Trust was forth commming and so it was earned
    through thoughts made to words, it was easily burned
     Heartaches occurred, friendships are shattered
    my eyes unfocused on what truly mattered
     No more will the phone ring no longer the laughter
     Just hate filled glances of a friendship in tatters....

    SPC Knight Gregory M
     Sometime after OIF 1

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    daughterofnyx commented on GUILTY...

    02-24-2010

    i actually really love this poem. love the flow of it.
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    kpeery09 commented on GUILTY...

    02-24-2010

    Another excellent one, you deffinitly know how to write at a good flow to were we can see your emotions, your heart being copied from you and pasted onto here to express a poem that means something to you. Not to many do this, and this is what poetry is suppose to be about. Keep up the good work.
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    jademelissa74 commented on GUILTY...

    02-23-2010

    I appreciate the honesty that you display here. There is passion within this piece. It is a thought-provoking poem and it actually inflicts reflection upon the reader. A good content!
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    Desmotti commented on GUILTY...

    02-22-2010

    Very good...short and to the point. I do appreciate poetic line thought...ripping ones attention...and leaving them there to remember all of the poem...short....precise....nice.
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    MootPoint commented on GUILTY...

    12-04-2009

    I like this one. So the friendship is what truly matters? I am not sure what caused the friendship to crash or who's fault it was.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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