Another year passes

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I wrote this for my daughter her birthday is october 12
She turned 11. Before I posted this I got a  phone call
That nobody ever wants to get. I lost my father -in -law... He was only 54 years old and my main regret is he will not be around to see his grandkids when they finally come home. He died on my daughters 11th birthday. It truly was a sad sad day. Rest In Peace Glenn we love and miss you!!!

Another year passes

Not really much of a poem just more of a story, sit and
and let me explain, Theres no need to hurry.


It's Monday morning  and the wind is blowing, the air is crisp and leaves are turning. I open my eyes to find the sun shinning bright. I know in my heart somethings not quite right.  With a flash and a bang I know to clearly,
This pain I have is because I miss you dearly.  I think of you often, but on days like this.. it is so hard not to reminisce. To go back in time and remember happier days. those are the memories that I wish would stay.
I can recall your laughter and the fun times we had.
Looking back isn't so bad, until I realize
Memories like that are like a two edged sword, They bring back such good times, but once those  fade, your faced with a reality all to cold. I can't live in my memories nor can I live in my past. So I write what I feel and hope in time that what you see will help you understand. Not a day goes by with out you on my mind, and days like this If I had one wish it would be for you to KNOW with a doubt, that today I thought of you most and sent out all my love and hope. It's Monday morning and the wind is blowing, the air is crisp and the leaves are turning...... Another year has come and gone... My memories of you are all that keep me strong.




Happy birthday Jennifer Lynn... Mommy loves you!











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Chaos128 commented on Another year passes

04-09-2010

A muted tale of life's strange vicissitudes; I think it's trying to figure them out that causes most anguish. A truly memorable piece.

ayyan commented on Another year passes

02-01-2010

Birth day is a day that is the important day , you have written very nicely

lonewolf commented on Another year passes

11-29-2009

beautifully written, and well stated. what makes it special for me..... my daughters name is also jennifer lynn

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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