Finding Peace

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    Short and sweet dont ya think!!!

    Finding Peace

    With Every Breath I Take....
    I'm CloserAnd Closer To Those
    Pearly Gates....
    If One Day, Someday Soon, I Should Breathe My Last....
    Weep Not For Me,
    I'm In HIS Arms At Last!!!

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    Dark commented on Finding Peace

    09-30-2010

    WOW.....true words of death.....but comfort.......IDK -Dark

    lonewolf commented on Finding Peace

    09-23-2010

    very well said kristina. a very short poem, but a very strong statement.

    Kristina

    09/23/2010

    Thank you sweetie.

    Chaos128 commented on Finding Peace

    09-22-2010

    you've certainly made a striking, and straightforward statement, and I don't wanna be a bucket of cold water, K, but is being dead the only way to find peace?

    Kristina

    09/23/2010

    Of course not. I wrote this in five minutes after hearing a dear family friend had passed and I was trying to give comfort. I find peace in every day life, I have to or else I'd go insane.LOL.

    FranzJ commented on Finding Peace

    09-22-2010

    a short,sweet and strong testement to your faith- - - - - - - - -

    Rhymer commented on Finding Peace

    09-22-2010

    When those secure in his arms pass away, it is a time for rejoicing. Ten from me.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    Kristina’s Poems (28)

    Title Comments
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    Reborn 1
    What if 2
    My Flow 3
    The Dance 3
    Backstabbed by love 2
    Thoughts... 3
    Falling Star 6
    Finding Peace 8
    Screaming To Be Free 9
    Another year passes 3
    Memories 8
    Rebirth 9
    Confusion 2
    Betrayed 7
    To My Daughters 12
    To My Son 9
    Hollow 3
    Ain't that a shame 2
    This Deep Sadness 13
    Darkness 9
    Painful Parting 8
    A silent Prayer 6
    Mine To Keep 14
    Seperate Ways 3
    Moving on 3
    Brave new Me 6
    Heartache 3
    Just Me 10