Dragons Of My Heart

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    I wrote this for my boyfriend... :)

    Dragons Of My Heart

    The dragons of my heart
    ignite the pumps and valves
    That bring forth the strength
    To help me through the day.

    But when you come around...
    These dragons get sort of dizzy,
    and flutter about,
    like butterflies.
    Making my heart queasy
    and my mind romantic.

    Your fingers interlace with mine,
    and the warmth of your skin
    is like a sea of fire
    on my palms...

    You cradle my heart,
    putting my dragons to sleep
    with the lullaby of
    your fingers
    running down my stomach.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2010

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    RoseFromARose commented on Dragons Of My Heart

    09-06-2010

    I'm really diggin' the way you write. You have such a way with words. Beautiful imagery and romance and how he puts you in a love filled trance.
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    BringMeBullets

    09/23/2010

    Thank you... :)

    tuggerina commented on Dragons Of My Heart

    08-20-2010

    wow I think this is just an awesome poem and you did a really good job with it. using dragons as symbolism was very clever and I loved it!
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    BringMeBullets

    09/23/2010

    Thank you... :)

    iLuvPoetryJACOB commented on Dragons Of My Heart

    06-14-2010

    I absolutely love the way you described the way he brings you peace. "You cradle my heart, putting my dragons to sleep with the lullaby of your fingers running down my stomach." I love the metaphors in this piece! Great work, a ten from me. --Natalie.
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    BringMeBullets

    06/18/2010

    Thank you... :)

    BlackButterfly1 commented on Dragons Of My Heart

    05-21-2010

    Awww how sweet. It's as if he provides a sense of peace and comfort. I love the way you described the feeling. Well written.
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    BringMeBullets

    06/18/2010

    Thank you...

    stever commented on Dragons Of My Heart

    05-19-2010

    love the dragon ,, be the dragon ...good write..............STEVER
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    BringMeBullets

    06/18/2010

    Thank you...

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