Double-Edged

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    Double-Edged

     Shining Sun,
    the warmth you bring,
    your blaze scorching the burned.
    Shedding light on those who've fallen,
    mocking those who fall.
    Greeting new days with a gleam,
    ending with sorrow.
    Spreading your rays throughout the world,
    a double-edged sword.
    Your fire, so bright,
    the awe you bring,
    the fear you hold.
    The Life you hold so dear,
    smothered in your bosom.

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    FranzJ commented on Double-Edged

    06-12-2010

    yes, the sun can be double edged along with rain, too much water, etc.........
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    MCram

    09/27/2010

    Yes it can be; however, I used the sun as an analogy to a person that I know.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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