Dark Storm

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    Dark Storm
    Black seas churn,
    spitting wave upon wave,
    beating Earth.
    Thunder cracks,
    ringing in the air.
    Lightning
    licking all in its path,
    leaving its mark.
    Black tears fall to Earth,
    boiling the surface.
    Life withering
    under the touch of storms.

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    Loner7 commented on Dark Storm

    09-15-2009

    First I would like to say thank you. I feel it is a good work. I think I understand. Life is difficult w/o much of a sense of hope at the moment. If I have missed the point please let me know. I would like to understand.
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    MCram

    12/08/2009

    You got it :)I acutally wrote this a while ago when I just found that Life was just asking too much to the point that it was just abusive. I guess it could be said that way.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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