Communion With Dawn

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    Communion With Dawn

     In the stillness of the early morn
    When nature shakes off the remnants of slumber
    Leaves stretching, flowers opening
    I sit quietly with my cup of tea in reflection.

    Gazing at the first visages of dawn
    As the sun lazily climbs into the heavens
    Gradually dressing the day in a kaleidoscope of hues
    Huddling a bit deeper into the quilt I have wrapped about me.

    Oh quiet morn what blessing will you bestow today?
    A gentle shower, a warm caress?
    Or will passion shatter us from our doldrums,
    Enveloping fury of an unleashed tempest.

    Communion with nature, I tune into earths heartbeat
    Thundering through my blood, rejuvenating my soul
    I rise and salute you in prayer and thanksgiving
    Calmer from the spiritual union of birthing a new day.

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    leolioness commented on Communion With Dawn

    11-28-2009

    A very lovely poem. A sweet expression of the early morning rising.
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    WinterFrost commented on Communion With Dawn

    08-03-2009

    Ah alone time in the AM. I like the false dawn and the fog myself. Nice read.
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    ginga commented on Communion With Dawn

    07-29-2009

    Lena, What a wonderful and serene poem. You have chosen such tender and natural words to describe a very spiritual experience and bond with the earth. ty for this poem. ginga
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    dragonfly1023 commented on Communion With Dawn

    06-18-2009

    a lovely reflection of life and nature as you awaken to a new day. I can see the respect you have for this gift we share called Earth LenaMP.
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    LenaMP

    06/30/2009

    Thank you for the wonderful review. I greatly appreciate it.

    WordSlinger commented on Communion With Dawn

    06-15-2009

    This is beautiful, the title is very unique. The last line is great, :), My good friend, of nature and poetry, I like it, alot.
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    LenaMP

    06/17/2009

    Hello friend. Haven't heard from you in awhile. Hope everything is going good for you. Thanks for the review.

    WordSlinger

    07/29/2009

    You can reenter this in the contest without losing these comments, look for the link, great poem..

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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