Bred for life

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    Bred for life

    Woke up this morning
    Got the kids fed and ready for school
    Went back upstairs
    Grabbed ahold of my life
    And punched it in the face 95 times
    Then went about getting off to work
    And getting on with my day

    I'm a bad ass
    And like so many others
    It's a hard candy shell
    It's easy to forget
    That it's soft in the middle

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    devaamido commented on Bred for life

    09-12-2009

    Wow, do I ever know how THAT feels!! Great write by a real woman who (I'll bet) is much sturdier than she says she feels. 10 for straight up honesty!

    HarverTomsson commented on Bred for life

    03-28-2009

    So is that why you stopped at 95? lol Loved the grit, and self revelation here. A veneer of faked sweetness is never as satisfying as that honey from the secreted store.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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