A Slim Figure Rising

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    A Slim Figure Rising

    The burning building was hell,
    no survivors as far as he could tell,
    he shouted out in pain,
    he suffered a mental drain,
    gagging on the bad air,
    as he fought the fear,
    the smoke was nearly visible in the twilight,
    the fire-fighters did put up a good fight,
    the flames were thick and he choked,
    so much damage, and so much smoke,
    a slim figure rising and stumbled toward him,
    he found it difficult to choke out a word,
    but he made enough sounds to be heard,
    he moaned, groaned,
    shaking his head,
    a hand pulled him to safety,
    and he realized he wasn’t amongst the dead.

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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Atanacio’s Poems (43)

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    In A Cool, Dry Place 0
    Masking Her Fate 2
    Complete The Beasts 0
    Souls Sang 2
    Guilty, And He Knew Why 0
    Eyes Smoldering 0
    Quiet The Cries 0
    A Slim Figure Rising 0
    He Sensed Defeat 0
    Calm Passed 0
    Marched Briskly 0
    Trinity Sunday 1
    He Stood In The Shadows 0
    Familiar Stranger 0
    Ocean Air 0
    Earthbound 1
    Into Glazed Eyes 0
    Proof Of God 1
    Peculiar Brush With Death 0
    State Rested 0
    No Sign Of Regret 0
    First Kiss 0
    Asphyxiation 0
    Condemnation 1
    Her Emotions Were Mummified 1
    No Kingdom Come 1
    Deck Red 0
    God's Eyes, Grim 1
    Floated To Heaven On A Dream 0
    Nothing More Than A Dream 0
    A Flamboyant Amber 0
    Life Fell Prey 0
    Emotions Sift 0
    The Silence Was Unnerving 0
    Die... 0
    This Game 0
    Only A Voice Mail 0
    A Flamboyant Amber 2
    Soft Kisses 1
    Ghost Shook Her Head 1
    Exhilarating Freedom 0
    Muted Chatter 0
    Putting Death On Hold 1