a lost of a mothers love

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a lost of a mothers love

she's my mother,
but...
does she love me?
do i even love her?
ive tried to make it up to her,
ive tried to make her proud of me.
im sorry for what ive done in the past.
but i wanted to feel loved,
why dont you show me love?
why dont you care?
she doesnt trust me,
i dont even trust me.
my life is falling apart,
an she doesnt even see it.
have i tried to end my life?
oh ive tried, oh ive tried.
but i couldnt bare to leave my little sister,
who, for some reason,
losing my love for her.
i smoke, drink even have sex.
but does my mother see it?
i believe not,
ive lost all hope.
im losing my love for her,
an i think shes losing her love for me.
i seem to be a big problem,
in everyones life.
so ive found a soulution,
ill pack my bags,
maybe leave a note saying my goodbyes,
an jus leave an to never return.

By: Amanda Martinez

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Dancer022597 commented on a lost of a mothers love

08-05-2009

I toally feel your confusion! I don't have a good relationship with my mom either, but I'm trying to work on it! Good worl and keep on writing!

oldgoat commented on a lost of a mothers love

07-24-2009

I'm not even sure how I got your writing, but I do know and understand your pain more than you realize. I guess I learned a lot of it the hard way. The main thing to know and realize, you are not alone unless you choose to be. You have a Father in Heaven that loves you more than any human heart can imagine. Trust Him, He will give you peace and set your heart free.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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