Will I ever be?

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    • Baybie_Rawr
    • Okay guys. I don't use this account anymore for those who even care. I've created a new OP called Bombthatasian. I'm going to transfer all my poems over. Just letting you guys know, so I'm not accused of plagiarism. I'll be deleting this account very shortly.

    Will I ever be?
    Mother Mother
    Will I be want you want me to be?
    Will I be perfect enough for you to be proud
    proud enough to call me your daughter?
    I've lived so much of my life
    living below your expectations
    Will you love me?
    Even if I have all my flaws
    Mother Mother
    Your suppose to love me
    Even if I'm messy
    I'm not that intelligent
    If I'm ugly
    But turns out
    Only the best for you
    I'm an outcast in your life
    Mother Mother
    Will I ever be Perfect enough?

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    wheelsal commented on Will I ever be?

    07-21-2009

    I hope you showed this to you mother. Sally.....................
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    gregaone commented on Will I ever be?

    07-01-2009

    a grammatical error or 2 but a nice poem.................................................................................
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    Phoenix9 commented on Will I ever be?

    12-05-2008

    very well written,good read.
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    timeoutofmind commented on Will I ever be?

    11-05-2008

    What a sad, but lovely poem,,,very well written!!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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