Game

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  • Baybie_Rawr
  • Okay guys. I don't use this account anymore for those who even care. I've created a new OP called Bombthatasian. I'm going to transfer all my poems over. Just letting you guys know, so I'm not accused of plagiarism. I'll be deleting this account very shortly.

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This is for a friend who just needed to hear it.

Game

When did this game begin?
When had we rolled the dice of fate?
But now we can't stop
We'll keep rolling
No one ever wins
Because we never stop
we kept tempting fate
and now fate is tempting us
we'll roll the dice once more
and see where that lands
you passed go ,
come collect me
The sinful kisses
and the subtle hints
led to something so much more than what it was
when will the game end?
i'm getting tired of rolling the dice
i'll let you win
but you don't wanna stop
the game has become an addiction
the dice of fate has worked its charms
we'll never stop playing
we'll keep going
keep going till we drop
because we can't help but tempt fate
you passed go ,
come collect me
No no no
we have to stop ,
tuck the game board away and leave it to be forgotten
but it'll never stop
because we were addicted
the dice never stop rolling
and we never stop tempting
and once more the game begins .
you passed go ,
don't collect me this time .

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Paleidia commented on Game

07-22-2009

This one is GREAT! I really liked the metaphors. You are unbelievable!!!

Baybie_Rawr

07/22/2009

Thank you! :) I appreciate your comments. It makes my day!

Baybie_Rawr

07/22/2009

Thank you! :) I appreciate your comments. It makes my day!

gregaone commented on Game

07-20-2009

another good one..you r very insightful especially considering your age..

Baybie_Rawr

07/20/2009

thanks a lot . I appreciate so much that you read my poems.

Baybie_Rawr

07/20/2009

thanks a lot . I appreciate so much that you read my poems.

gregaone

07/22/2009

If I find a good poet..I read their work insatiably..ask anyone in here..i am not afraid to call rubbish rubbish..Your work is good and you have ALOT of potential..its as simple as that young friend..i promote your work with nearly every comment i make to others..because you have alot to teach them..

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Baybie_Rawr’s Poems (20)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Unexpected encounter 0
Me 1
A bit woozy 0
Humanity 0
Through 0
Insanity 0
Moon 0
Mountain 0
Family Love 1
Winning me over 0
Tatiana 0
Call my name 0
Don't tell Mama , Shh Shh 4
Game 2
I thank you 2
Smother 3
Nine Eleven 5
Come Back 1
My fault 4
Will I ever be? 4