My fault

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  • Lost Love
    • Baybie_Rawr
    • Okay guys. I don't use this account anymore for those who even care. I've created a new OP called Bombthatasian. I'm going to transfer all my poems over. Just letting you guys know, so I'm not accused of plagiarism. I'll be deleting this account very shortly.

    My fault
    Once so close
    Once so loved
    His love kept me going
    But it's gone
    Everyday is a day
    Where I regret
    Leaving you alone
    Now you've moved on
    and I'm so sad
    Missing you day and night
    Nothing seems right
    His love was something to be held close
    Something to cherish
    But now it's gone
    Our love is lost
    and it's all my fault...

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    wheelsal commented on My fault

    07-21-2009

    You must take classes to expand your talent. Sally
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    Baybie_Rawr

    07/22/2009

    Thanks , I would if i could. I'm too busy with school and helping my mom at our shop! Thanks for commenting so many poems. :D

    Baybie_Rawr

    07/22/2009

    Thanks , I would if i could. I'm too busy with school and helping my mom at our shop! Thanks for commenting so many poems. :D

    gregaone commented on My fault

    07-01-2009

    Most real poets arent tied to rules of rhyme but sometimes use them as a catch tool..Good poem young lady..I hope to see more. Also, as most poems are from genuine experience; I hope you get relief from your torment if this is indeed the case for you.
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    Will28 commented on My fault

    04-30-2009

    Very heartfelt. I like how your writing isn't tied to rules of ryme.
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    Phoenix9 commented on My fault

    11-28-2008

    very nice
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