When your love turns into hate

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    When your love turns into hate

     When your love turns into hate
    Your heart disinagrates
    When the person you long for
    Doesnt even take a second glance
    You know you'll never get your second chance

    The power and oppresion
    Turns into depression
    You never had that self confidence
    He was the only one that gave you the time of day
    she came along and took it all away

    The bruises and scars
    Are nothing but the memory left of you
    The only thing thats keeping me alive
    My heart aches
    turning so blue its about to break

    I never let you know the truth
    you were never strong enough to handle it
    Now your everywhere it seems
    Leaving me behind so alone and blind
    This is what happens when your love turns into hate

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    Tempestlady commented on When your love turns into hate

    07-31-2009

    Well done, lost the rhyme a bit at the end. Very good modern piece about lost love and conflicting emotions. Chin up, make yourself smile, introduce yourself, it may take a while, there are more fish in the sea, maybe it wasn't meant to be. Write on...
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    Panaramicpoet commented on When your love turns into hate

    05-27-2009

    WOW . . thats GREAT. Its very powerful. Keep up the good work. And remember always be your self. How do u know if there isnt a cute boy even now, who could be she . . . just like u . . trying to talk to u. u never know . . .be patient
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    Panaramicpoet

    05/27/2009

    i meant to say *shy

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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