Look in my eyes

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  • Sadness

    Look in my eyes

     I wonder what would happen,
    If we all just got along,
    If maybe one day we all didnt make our life into a sad song,

    One day we'll have whats better,
    Some day we'll be together,
    Don't give up,
    Its not the end,
    Look in my eyes,
    And know i'll always be your friend

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    Tempestlady commented on Look in my eyes

    07-31-2009

    Short but sweet. Just fine the way it is. Good rhythm, nice rhyme. I'll read yours if you read mine. Peace...
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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