Hoping he would see

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    Hoping he would see

    I changed my appearance
    Hoping he would see
    Now I stand out
    More than you could believe

    I thought it was good
    It turned out to be bad
    Now i'm being made fun of
    I miss what we had

    I use to be someone
    Now i'm nothing more than trash
    I miss the sun and the breeze
    It's all gone in a flash

    I'm forgotten in this world
    Faster than a flash
    I'm hurting more than you know
    I'm holding back
    My happiness I lack

    Sometimes I wish I was never born
    How could they be so cruel
    My soul is so torn
    When morning comes
    It'll be too late

    I care for you more than you know
    I even changed my appearance
    Hoping he would see

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    ansari commented on Hoping he would see

    07-16-2010

    sounds great, a nice flow of words so relevant to many lives. a 10 from me.
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    ayyan commented on Hoping he would see

    11-20-2009

    It is very good which has touched my mind and understood your inner feelings. ayyan
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    Tempestlady commented on Hoping he would see

    09-27-2009

    You gotta be you. For him to see, there is always time, send him a rhyme, make a nice gesture, just be there when he's down. Turn your frown upside down. The doctor prescribes some good clean fun! Boys notice happy girls, go were he is when your done. Lovely piece. write on....
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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