Warned You

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  • Sadness

    Warned You
    You won't like me
    I know you won't.
    If you really knew
    what goes on in this head
    of mine. You'ld be scared,
    elecrified, by how it
    ticks and tocks.

    I'm really cruel,
    yet shy to the eye.
    I'm a terific actress.
    I can make you believe
    I'm sincere and all the
    sugar and spice. I can lie
    through my teeth. A DNA

    combo from my father.
    I'll bat my blues and make you
    feel like you are the only one,
    yet inside this heartless soul
    I'll be critique and brutal and rip
    you to shreds. Lucky for you,
    I'll keep all this hurt, anger
    and cruelness inside.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Warned You

    03-17-2009

    nice but you need to work on your Form of writing and structur.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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