Environment

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    Environment

    Crashing waves and violins,
    Giant greens, and rough brown trees,
    Feeling the morning shower beneath nimble feet,
    Is my sanctuary.

    Screeching voices like holler monkeys,
    Elephant books brakes my back like a dictator,
    My body invisible to the naked eye, as a virus in the body,
    Is my hell.

    Laughing hyenas are my friends and I,
    Bouncing balls and swaying palm trees to the beat of the dance party,
    Moving pictures and heart wrenching actions of a moving pictures,
    Is my fun.

    My soul changes like the moon
    as I slide into different atmospheric pressures.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Environment

    03-17-2009

    i like this one. it has good structure. but you could use a biger vocab. but not bad not bad at all. Good poem.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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