Sudden Fun

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  • Erotic

    Sudden Fun

    Touch
    Bend
    Twist
    Bask.
    Vehicals
    are not
    made for
    this.
    Teasing
    Pleasing
    Kissing the other.
    Not missing nor having a
    stutter in the beat.
    Don't want to get
    caught
    necking, in the
    Wal-Mart parking lot.
    In the
    end, a small
    mark
    makes
    you
    mine.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Sudden Fun

    03-17-2009

    i like your creativity in this one (but) like i said b4 you need work on your line structur.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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    How we do it 1
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    What we do 0
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    Party Nights 1
    Darken Day 1
    Night Fun 1
    What Happened? 1