What Happened?

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    What Happened?

    I first knew something was wrong by the quiet.
    There was not a riot,
    not a noise, not a peep.
    The quiet seeps into me.
    I wonder,
    I look.
    The house felt drained as did me.
    This is not how it is so suppose to be!
    Our house was alive,
    like a garden full of sweet delight.
    But now it is dead!
    I ponder why?
    As I glided by each room,
    I knew I was doomed!
    Then a scream broke the silence,
    the scream was full of violence!
    I felt relief, but I was not glad,
    instead I felt mad!
    Running like the wind,
    down the hall,
    down the stairs,
    into a room.
    I discovered Isabelle in a state of shock,
    But my view was blocked.
    Then I saw,
    it was a crime,
    some one broke the law.
    I first knew something was wrong by the quiet.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on What Happened?

    03-17-2009

    this is very good but it could have been longer and used more detail. sory but i couldnt get it better that an 8.3 it desers about a 9.3. :) nice poem.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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