uncomplicated

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    uncomplicated

     

    I know you are speaking

    But I am not listeneing

    I only hear the fountain

    Bubbling merrily away

     

     Our sexual apathy

    Screwing with no connection

    You could be any dick

    On any given day

     

    Eyes flat with indifference

    Settling for mediocrity

    Not really caring

    Seeing

    Living

    Breathing

    Touching

    Feeling

    Puking

    Fucking

    in uncomplicated shades of grey

     

     

    Katylove©2009

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on uncomplicated

    07-22-2010

    This is good stuff here. Straight up, honest and real. I like it. 10*
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    DeepEclipse commented on uncomplicated

    08-20-2009

    I like the line -uncomplicated shades of grey- It is ironic, because most "shades of grey" would swear they are colorful....and so mysterious and beyond... and blah blah blah. Yet this poem puts it into its place. Into the mediocre, cookie-cutter position it deserves.
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    magicmanzz commented on uncomplicated

    08-13-2009

    i like this one it's right to the point keep it up i like the way you write
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    Katylove

    08/17/2009

    Spanx You MagicM

    Lucho commented on uncomplicated

    08-11-2009

    Ouch. So much hate and disgust for this man. You are devoided of any feelings and connection. I really felt the streangth in your words of "Eyes flat with indifference, settling for mediocrity, not really caring". Then when you finish with "puking, fucking" , It sums up your theme so well. Keep up the great work. A perfect 10 from me because of how real and intense this poem is.
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    Katylove

    08/11/2009

    Thank you Lucho~...if you were close enough I'd hug you!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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