Sgt. FUCK

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    This took place when I lived In West Germany, I happened to be there when the dmark peaked at 4 something I think.. or close to it..so that will help with the timing.. we lived in military family qaurters located on the economy..,There really is Sgt FLICK..and this really did happen..
    weird to think about it after allll this time..

    Sgt. FUCK

    Sgt FUCK

     

    He was a regular at the NCO club in West germany

    His last name was FLICK

    But it was embroidered in stick letters on his nametag of his bdu’s

    So it looked Like FUCK

    I called him Sgt Fuck.

    He also beat his wife,and I know this because we lived in the same building.

    Hiya Sgt Fuck, beat your wife lately?

    Just give me a Jack & Coke.

    So I did.

    I never met Mrs. Fuck. Never saw her either.

    But everyone at 36 Buchbrunnen Strasse, Kitzingen, West Germany

    Knew of her.

     We heard her wails through the night.

    And those who didn’t were told about it.

    Oh yeah, big time screaming from the 3rd floor.. How can you not hear it?

    All the way up to the 6th  floor? Noooo..

    Oh yeah yeah.. real loud last night, you missed it.

     No one ever called the MP’s

    I guess we were all caught up in our own lives

    That was 25 years ago.. maybe more.

    I was telling my husband about it..and he said maybe they weren’t fighting

    Maybe they were fucking

    Maybe she is a howler

    And ya know what..

    Maybe he is right….

     

    Katylove©2009

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    Charlie23 commented on Sgt. FUCK

    08-02-2010

    And I couldn't help but read it all the way to the end once I started reading... Should have I laughed... cause I did... just wrong.
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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Sgt. FUCK

    07-22-2010

    I like this!! Your writing style is unique and intriguing.
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    laurilang5 commented on Sgt. FUCK

    03-26-2010

    This was excellent! I think I have known a few Sgt. Fucks over the years. Great imagery in this piece. You most definitely have a talent my dear!
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    freind commented on Sgt. FUCK

    11-03-2009

    all i can say about that is this. that was pretty dam good.then when i got to the end of it. to hear that last comment it cracked me up.sorry but he might of been right keep the good work.oh by the way thank-you for defending me for my poem liar from miah h
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    frog commented on Sgt. FUCK

    08-26-2009

    Very peculiar. I like the creative twist at the end.
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