Twisted

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Twisted

Though I feel this knot in my shoulder,
I feel l've been lifted off a boulder
And lead through this twisting path,
Only to be lead right back
To a blinding light and no one by me,
I feel a small light leading me
Through this twisted path
And out of this labrynth
It still holds me tight
Even in my own plight.

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Delrae commented on Twisted

08-10-2009

Your writing is delightful, thankyou for the opportunity to read it.

Tempestlady commented on Twisted

08-01-2009

We are all one. This piece is very good. It reminds people that even at our worst we are never alone. Amen. The message is clear. Write on....

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

mysticpoet’s Poems (16)

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He Put Me Together 0
I Love You 2
Into Fading Grey 1
Twisted 2
With God 1
Cry for Love 0
Flowing Over To You 0
My Storm Inside 0
Branching out Of Sorrow 0
Easy Target 0
A Moment Inspired 1
Fire Inside 2
Snow flakes 0
Seeking Solace 0
Blooming Out 2
Love As A Ladder 0