Tranquility

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    A Tongue Twister poem is made up of lines/verses that are hard to say when read aloud by using similar consonant sounds in succession (use of alliteration). In other words, the poem ties your tongue into knots. This form does not require end or internal rhyme.

    Tranquility

     Mystic moonlight, moments meet
    Softly, someplace songbirds sweet
    Simple, soothing, soulful sounds
    Memories murmur, mossy mound
    Wander wistful, winding ways
    Loiter, loving, lilacs lay
    Loafing langour, listless leaves
    Weeping willow, wistful weave
    Poised picture, pristine plain
    Ruling romance, restive reign
    Rising rapture, rustic ride
    Perfect pleasure, peace presides...

    By Michael Smith

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    Kingwebstar commented on Tranquility

    10-22-2012

    I love your work .You're a excellent writer . Thanks for continue to post here and write cause this site wouldn't be the same without you. Love Da KinG
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    poeticmike

    10/24/2012

    Thanks brother, such high praise like that uplifts me. Thanks for the read...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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