As I Was Comforted (Rondeau)

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    As I Was Comforted (Rondeau)

     As I was comforted by the crisp air
    Felt its peace flow through my hair
    A sparkling emerald, rarely seen
    Emulated sun in buoyant green
    Calmed by reclined rays, cool & fair.

    I scoped the kiddies play & run
    I felt my spirit join their fun
    Serenity basks a gleeful scene
    As I was comforted.

    A bad forecast is due, but none came
    This soothing day remains the same
    Hints of rough shows pastel view
    Acrid trials, of maraud, loses through
    A final twinge, still did not pierce
    As I was comforted.

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    Pocahantas commented on As I Was Comforted (Rondeau)

    04-24-2013

    Been awhile hasn't it chef? I really like the mood I get from this. Reminds me of a beautiful spring day. It's a shame so few people really take the time to enjoy it. Good write :)
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    poeticmike

    07/06/2013

    Yes it has and thank you..

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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