Personified Love

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This piece summarizes love from its deep imagery & definition to its quality & balance. We all know how to love, but to grasp the meaning of love & what it consists of is a process we must all go thru & learn or we will never recieve it in a social sense........

Personified Love

Love is a state of mind more fantasy than truth,
The knowlege of it is one of a kind but all is unwilling proof,
The feeling of love can be as a graceful creek flowing peacefully about,
But also it can be as a relentless rockslide catostrophically falling with doubt,
If a man tells a woman he loves her he must be faithful, honest, and committed,
He must mean it to the heart strongly and passionately when he looks to her eyes to admit it,
If the woman feels the same about him its then cohesive as she express,
Her desires must be real and unconditional just as his or the bond will never progress,
Only time will tell as the embrace prevails from both so heavily in love,
If it works it will be from Gods plan to let it ignite as it floats like a cloud above,
Most people will never notice the strength of true love or the compassionate message it subdues,
But if we as a pepole don't wake up and realize, the future of our young will tremendously lose.

By Michael Smith

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Wakeitha commented on Personified Love

06-04-2012

Beautiful, I love how u really define true love for a men and a woman. Sometime us women think it will never come tru because thats in the nature. But if we look at it in the spiritual eye, we must realize a man must find the woman. Not the woman find the man.God must be #1 in the relationship so it can grow in something beautiful.Kudos...Kudos..

winterkou commented on Personified Love

02-03-2011

A great descriptive write bro. You really grasped the concept of love in this maginificeint piece.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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