My Deepest Fear

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    My Deepest Fear

     My deepest fear is more than
    what meets the eye,
    Its the worst of all to me
    and 1 i want to die,
    I express it so many ways
    but keep it locked inside,
    It resides deeply within my head
    and i never let it subside,
    Most people know what my fear
    is cause we share it as the same,
    Its the one we can never hide
    from but truthfully on we claim,
    Its the one i neglect to think about
    but without it i wont prevail,
    Its clear to see my deepest fear
    is the fear to let up and fail.

    By Michael Smith

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    Wakeitha commented on My Deepest Fear

    06-04-2012

    Great written, I share this with u, we try to please everybody, but there weight on us pull us down and trapp us. Me I had to ask God to deliver me from (man) people. I was free Cause I live life to please only him cause he will never let u down.Please God first and when you do that he will teach u how to love and be please with yourself.God Bless
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    BreeLove commented on My Deepest Fear

    03-12-2012

    Just remember in life so many people have expectations of us, our parents, friends and family. But if u remember the only person in life u have to please is u!!!! then as long as ur happy with what u do and where u r in life u will be just fine! do u and fuck the rest! set goals for u and ur life, and then keep it movin ! Bree
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    NitaBoo commented on My Deepest Fear

    02-08-2011

    This is a good write and I like it because it is relative to many...
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    JazzyBaby commented on My Deepest Fear

    02-05-2011

    I totally understand, being afraid of failing and disappointing someone, or ruining their life. My neice and nephew are like my own children to me and I am always afraid of failing them.
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    poeticmike

    02/05/2011

    Thats why you must stay strong & keep your head up for them & perservere thru any & every obstacle that wants to deprive you from prevailing.....

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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