The darkness

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    The darkness

    Close your eyes.
    You lose your mind.
    You caress the darkness with fingers of ice.
    You can feel nothing but the loss of forever.
    So close your eyes to lose your mind your heart your sole in the cold.
    You've felt all the pain.
    Shared the sorrows of every sole.
    Lost in the abyss, darkness. Theres no
    thing not even the beat of your heart.
    "Meaningless are the forevers, meaningless are the loves, meaningless all so meaningless. The hopes and the dreams that are shattered in the night."
    You wait for the darkness to swallow you whole.
    But it waits patiently biding its time.
    You pace your cage so frozen and cold. Distancing your self from the world below.
    You ponder.
    They have been broke and shattered there soles have been torn and yet they get up again and they fight they stand and then they go on how.
    So you let it go and try once more. You are defeated. You run fearing the world.
    Hoping soon they will forget.
    Yo are frozen.
    Caressing your darkness like it were your lover.
    Needing it wanting it inviting it in.

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    PoetsofBlood commented on The darkness

    09-12-2009

    Chili, in here or is it, oh yes its the poem, nice, as ice, :)

    origionalmerlin commented on The darkness

    04-27-2009

    the puppy is a good writer..lol good again, a bit wordy but worthy on what you direct the readers perception to and the flow and continuity not bad for off your head..

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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