Temporary

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  • Lost Love
    • Tison
    • is listening to music hoping it can help the bordom

    Temporary
    This is my
    Minor setback…
    In this
    Small town
    Small place
    Small world,
    Where a boy can’t love a girl.
    This is the
    Agony that
    Was given to me…
    This joyful groom.
    Pretentious life.
    Unbroken toys.
    Where girls
    Keep the
    Bickering for the boys.
    This is my
    Happy ending…
    Angry home.
    Storm full cries.
    Barren womb.
    Where everyone has a tomb.
    And this is
    Where I left him…
    Silent boy.
    Narrow smile.
    One hard to find,
    Where he stays in my mind.

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    Crush commented on Temporary

    08-31-2009

    i love this. it's simply written with sharp lines that punch out meaning. made me sad but that doesn't diminish it's quality. "Where a girl can't love a boy." that really got me the most and the words before it. thanks, nice write.
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    Tison

    08/31/2009

    Hey, Thank you for the comment. I am glad that you like it...I wrote this base on what I saw as life at the time.

    astroplane commented on Temporary

    03-11-2009

    :)
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    Tison

    06/16/2009

    Glad you like it :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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