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    SUN

    SUN

     

     

     

     

    Look into the sun but not too much,

    Walk around the beach on the sand at night,

    Listened to the waves,

    Hold you in my arms,

    I never took time to do this,

    I was to busy trying to be cool,

    But now I am all alone with out a clue,

    I wish I wasn’t just a dumb fool,

    But that’s what I wanted that’s what I needed,

    Now is to late,

    I wish I could repeat it,

    Because you were my fame,

    Show you I change,

    And you see it in your heart to hold my hand,

    Once again.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on SUN

    05-21-2010

    I like the use of nature in this poem. Very good.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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