NAME

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    As I do my rounds,

    I hear that sweat voice calling my name,

    Who could it be?

    But she asks me what her name was?

    So I just walked away with a smile on my face,

    Didn’t say a thing I couldn’t believe what did she see in me,

    Could it be that she is just a kid,

    She is curious how tall I am or could it be,

    She wanted more than just a face,

    I was just trying to hold her hand but I stay away,

    I was afraid because I have no game,

    I guess it was something I said,

    I am here writing to you every other day,

    I am not calling u by your name and were still friends.

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    hdmac commented on NAME

    06-12-2009

    At the end the shortening of "you" as "u" looks like a text message. Try to write out your words so they have a greater effect.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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