DROWNING

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DROWNING

 

DROWNING 

 

 

 

 

 

I just wanted to be with you 24 7,

I just thought I was in heaven,

I didn’t know you couldn’t breath,

I wasn’t trying to be mean,

I just wanted you to see,

How much you mean to me,

I just wanted you to be next to me,

So you can see how proud you made me be,

For having such a beauty,

For my queen.

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loveangel4life commented on DROWNING

05-23-2009

Oh gosh.....haha....this sounds just like what my boyfriend tries to explain to me when I say that he's smothering me. Only u say it in a better way. lol. Nice poem.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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