son usted jodiendo conmigo

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    son usted jodiendo conmigo

    I tend to spend my nights alone,
    Miserable in my home,
    Wondering what went wrong.
    See, I have a tendency
    To over analyze things.
    What makes you, you,
    Is what makes me believe.
    See I believe-
    There is something greater,
    A higher power.
    This is just my tendency.
    I tend to believe
    Every thing happens for a reason.

    Honestly, I don't know
    What the reason could be.
    Was it heart break season?
    Had you had enough of me?
    Was I meant to suffer,
    If so why me?

    Ignoring the discrepancy
    Of you love, but must leave me
    I should thank you.
    To the message left on my voice mail:
    I am sorry to hear your breaking up with me
    But thank you for not doing so publicly.
    In person I might beg for you to reconsider.
    I cant help but think, if you REALLY loved me
    Would you be content with being
    Just a voice in my inbox?
    Sorry to question you, voice,
    but that is just my tendency.

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    Milagros commented on son usted jodiendo conmigo

    10-19-2009

    I can truly relate to this poem, especially the phrasing.. "Was it heartbreak season?" I definitely feel the pain, anguish, and frustration you were experiencing. Very nice :)

    MCross

    10/24/2009

    Thank you for your kind words.

    DennisScott commented on son usted jodiendo conmigo

    08-07-2009

    I see the sadness, frustration, and anger in this poem. It flows; I like it.

    mistyparish commented on son usted jodiendo conmigo

    03-20-2009

    good. good. good

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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