One More Chance

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  • Devotion

    One More Chance
    One more second,
    Fumbled from the hands of time.
    Another tick of the taunter.
    An added day without you.

    An extra hour,
    Being without your touch.
    More moments in time,
    Without you.

    One more moment
    To miss your smile.
    A new day,
    To wait for you.

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    SmileyAngel138 commented on One More Chance

    08-27-2009

    i def like how you described how it felt about missing someone...simple yet sweet...def a good one :-)
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    Grito commented on One More Chance

    04-17-2009

    A positive view of being without. By the way, from the root that fruits to grape, is distilled the wine.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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