Lets go to Subway

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    Lets go to Subway
    My Sweet porcelain queen,
    Silently starring into space,
    What we had was special.
    Soft, cold, vanilla flesh
    Against your chocolate warrior.
    Sharing silhouettes
    In the morning time,
    The mistake was mine.
    I should have never let you in.
    I should have been faithful
    'till the end.

    Nicole had a right to know,
    I should have told her.
    Instead you showed her, our spot.
    Your all i have left now
    So i will give you my all.
    My joy and my pain.
    I will spoil you
    With perishable diamonds,
    you throat and wrist will drip ruby's.
    I will take from you
    what you hold dear
    As you have done to me.

    Never mind, I aint a killer
    But don't push me.
    Revenge is like the sweetest joy
    Next to getting Subway.

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    saveaheart commented on Lets go to Subway

    06-01-2009

    I really like this poem. It's very descriptive and different. My favorite part is the part about the diamonds and rubies.
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    Footprints2002 commented on Lets go to Subway

    03-14-2009

    Very Deep. Good Job
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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