seashore
the seashore out your window , across the sand you walk , across the beach the creatures talk , and from dawn to dusk you see the outline of the sky and the sun with its raise as it says goodbye. the outline of the moon says hello and the journey takes you on , as far as you can go. beauty ,laughter ,ecasty ,and fun they claim you as you lay out in the sun, laughter dies as the sun says goodbye.seashore
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- jenifer
- alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.
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Panaramicpoet commented on seashore
06-06-2009
- I like how you brought us to the beach. Seeing what is there and feeling like a day at the coast. Very nice.
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11/03/2011
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dahlusion commented on seashore
06-05-2009
- Beautifully rich in poetic imagery, bringing the reader along with you on this mystical adventure….
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