pieces
posting my life it seems ,meaningless drama, stuck up world leaving nothing behind at all. beautiful pieces stuck apart like a work of art. gliding away with the world each day, is like dancing in with arms apart . to reunite ourselvs with ease makes a way we each can please , with each day we unite ourselvs with world ,with peace ,with war and with you and me.pieces
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- jenifer
- alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.
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08-24-2009
- splendid work honey, Speaks about an issue Ive contemplated myself.
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rougepriest commented on pieces
08-24-2009
- I liked the sentiment of the poem and the rythem is good would like to hear more, its a little disjoined maybe a more clarified ending, over all i like it
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