jaded

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  • jenifer
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jaded

Bewilderment lost with destanotion, circles casting glances around her feet. no smooth surface coming up to meet, this acke this need growing like a seed. lost in time with pain by my side. the girl has shivers down her spine but not from the cold but from her fear hitting home. the last glance over her shoulder tells here that her fate is not sealed and there is still time. she sees a man the one that hurt her in her dreams , of her past like a look through the glass, but she knows he cant find her . that he wont try to be a man to cast aside her jaded view of men and who chose to cause those pain. some are good, but most those bad jaded eyes bring pain abide. 
     without these ways these tear not cried, not fallen from the eye. overcast by many years is this path without fears. this not end for faith makes it just the beginning. 
  


    from this solice from this seed. from this lust without a need. from this journey ,from this wraith we cant look back. to continue this path would be a sin worth her wraith.

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cliftondurant commented on jaded

09-07-2009

sound like a deep hurt and love can hurt at time but pain is not good no kind of pain keep on writing

RonicaLeigh commented on jaded

09-07-2009

I could really feel what you are saying here. A very telling write.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

jenifer’s Poems (193)

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putting myself first above the pain, getting on without abuse. 0
regrets of loves past due.........o
f romance and of you.
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Something i said to a grieving friend. 0
wondering on looking for you. 1
Missing a part.........
of the heart
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distance lies.... 1
dreams are. . . 2
it's 3 o'clock in the morning again. 0
belongings, there impact on our writing and what baggage everything else creates 0
the side of the universe, why it is the winds own dame 1
where is home.....? 1
Tants in my ear. Paper is mighter than your hateful dispostion 0
bohemian.....
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i sing of this....... 1
bleeding.....
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love at too high a price, to sleep........
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not ever figured out........ 0
it's a penny and a piece of candy..... 0
because you are mine. 0
done believeing 1
shadows of despair 0
what are you gonna do? 0
elements that touch us.... 0
these words 0
dreams are forever 1
i don't understand this touch this war inside... 0
what do you do? 0
scabbed over planet. 0
pain assult, freedom unaware......
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truth of life.... 0
these marks 1
pain ain't got no place here 0
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I don't yield 0
pain past perfection 0
expiration date 0
past 1
life's journey 0
stars in your eyes 0
don't let it knock you down 0
knock the glass 0
if only passion kept a tune 0
unkept 0
dust in your eyes 0
young and needs hand 0
poverty,poor being 0
walls to grow 0
show me the stars 0
bourbon 0
stage at the theatre 0
unbound , unyielding 0
moments fleeting 1
not a propasion to be won 0
party bargain 0
every dream and dreamer 0
disability 0
the heart will fall 1
oh baby oh well 0
make up your mind 0
borrowed time 1
not gonna let you burn me 0
long 0
judgment by thi self upon thi self 0
doin as only we and our heart can know 0
hell and heaven spent 0
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poor 1
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thighs 0
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rape has a name. 0
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the pain of no common sense. 1
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jaded eyes that bind me 2
jaded 2
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brace. 0
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laden 1
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ashes holey smoke. 4
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tombs 2
petal ,thorn and glass 4
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remember 2
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mind's eye 3
these tears 4
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romance 2
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cosmos 3
anothers arms 3
love you threw the moon 9
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faith 5
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rape 8
dreamer 3