take me as i am

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    take me as i am

     take me as i am , with the weight of the world on my shoulders.   with the pain of the world in my head, with the plessure so far apart from where i am that i dont know where to start. this place inside my heart creates a lonleyness like no other a path to pain ,that some days seems to have no end .   this war we wage upon ourselves starts from the beginning and seems to have no end in site.  so take me as i am, with all my misdeeds ,with all my pain acking up from my knees,with my indesicions,and my hopeless guilt, i say take me as i am and dont make me doubt my desicion. take me away from this pain into a garden of eden to meditate away my pain, take me away from the greed of the world , take me in your arms forever and love me as you can.

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    joewv commented on take me as i am

    08-09-2009

    this one does a 360 from all the others it show you do have feelings other than rage and hate i like it just as well cause we all have or dark sides ;)
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    archpoet commented on take me as i am

    06-25-2009

    your poetry seems very heart felt and honest, to me it comes off as personnal (this one perhaps less than others). I enjoyed it.
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    MrThrasher commented on take me as i am

    06-14-2009

    beautiful piece...i like your flow of poetry. you expressed ya self well...keep up da good work.. i wanna read more
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