Say it now or never

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    • How can you mend a broken heart if its been broken?

    Say it now or never
    I was born from a simple family
    I grown up with nothing I wish to have and be
    I learned how to deal life to live
    With the wishes and hopes that I always pray.

    Now that I am older for all of this
    I started to be impatient and selfish
    I dont want to wait for a second to have anything I want
    Beacuse I have my strength and power to fight.

    I tried to work here and there
    I tried to work anything I earn
    I tried to eat simple foods
    I tried to sleep nothing at all.

    Time passess to quickly and Iam here
    I did my dream to show to them
    I am excited to tell to her
    My one and only loving mother

    Above all this success
    I like to say Mom your the best
    I like to say thank you for guiding me
    And supported me with all your bless.

    But Iam sad and unhappy
    Even after I have all what makes me merry
    Because my Mom passed away
    Two months before I went back to the place I stay.

    Its too late for me to show or say the words
    But I know my Mom still looking and watching me most
    Inside my prayer and thoughts, I always say
    Thank you Mom and I love you.


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    shirineshat commented on Say it now or never

    02-26-2009

    I LIKE YOUR POEM
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    PoetryWriter commented on Say it now or never

    02-25-2009

    I found your poem to be sad, but a pleasure to read. Heartfelt emotions through out the whole write. My thoughts and prayers are with you. Thanks,for sharing. God Bless, P.W.
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    JaLaw commented on Say it now or never

    02-25-2009

    Beautiful poem. You write beautiful poetry.
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    Svana commented on Say it now or never

    02-24-2009

    ...I don't know how to start...your poem brought tears to my eyes...I can't imagine the pain you must go through,though I lost my granny almost two years ago and she was like a second mother to me,as she brought me up till the age of five,still I don't think it's the same,though I still cry over her loss...Still stay strong,for your mother surly watches over you,just like you say and she sure is proud...Take care!
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    lonewolf commented on Say it now or never

    01-25-2009

    very emotional poem. the pain of losing your mother will pass... the memory of her, is yours to keep.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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